I really enjoyed this.
Your editing is good and your art style is just so old fashioned and fun to see in action. What really makes this superb though is the dialogue. I don't mean the voice acting (which was also well done), I mean the actual written dialogue. It's easy to string cliches together and be an unimaginative pussy like so many animators here tend to do, so this was a fresh relief to all that.
Welcome to Newgrounds, I hope you continue to animate. Thank you so much for sharing this great cartoon with us.